Analysis of Once You Won

Feryal Rashdi 1996 (Kandiaro)



Once You Won

Here I am all alone,
With a sad similar tone,
Singing an old emotional song,
Making new decisions' zone,
Feeling the heartburn inside
Breaking the rules' bone,
Carrying a burden of memories,
To turn back the pain's loan,
Knowing no place to go
Wandering through roads unknown,
Leaving back that, "but, if, look and maybe,"
Started to walk and taking a chance,
And
I won't let it be again,
If once you won.


Scheme A BBXBXBXBXBXXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111101 1011001 101101001 1010101 100101 10011 1000101100 111011 101111 1001101 1011111010 101101001 0 1111101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 420
Words 88
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 15
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

The poem is about the challenge when we lose everything, but we re-stand and restart to repair ourselves and ready to fight back.

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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by feryalrashdi on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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