Analysis of Excelsior

Francis William Bourdillon 1852 (Runcorn) – 1921



If one should strive to reach a star,
He would not build a ladder high,
Seek foot by foot to climb so far,
And step by step ascend the sky;

But he would seek the wild bird’s wings,
The secret of the lightning’s play,
Leap out upon the night’s blue rings,
And hail at dawn his wished-for day.

I will not vainly seek to thee
By ladder-steps of wealth or fame,
Till some few feet below me be
The world, thy distance still the same.

But I will seek that influence
By which all nature’s marvels move,
Till I, by flash or flight from hence,
Win to thee as on wings of Love.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11111101 11110101 11111111 01110101 11110111 01010101 11010111 01111111 11110111 11011111 11110111 01110101 11111100 11110101 11111111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 568
Words 115
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Francis William Bourdillon

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