Analysis of Letters

Naomi Sara Buote 1968 (Prince Edward Island)



we
use to write
each other letters,
encyclopedias of our love

today
a trickle of blood
makes its way
out of me
each time
a silent vowel dies
at the end of the words
alone and invisible

you look at me
like a pinprick,
your flinty eyes
cut my wings

the silence sealed
between us
on a war footing

we eat our soup,
tomato and alphabet,
heads down,
swallowing our red letters

all our words
lying in bulk and rotting
in the pit of our stomachs


Scheme AXBX CXCAXDEX AXDX XXF XXXB EFX
Poetic Form
Metre 1 111 11010 001001101 01 01011 111 111 11 010101 101101 0100100 1111 1010 1101 111 0101 011 10110 11101 01010 11 10010110 1101 1001010 00111010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 442
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 4, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on September 01, 2022

Submitted by buotenaomi on September 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Naomi Sara Buote

A retired English teacher currently living in Quebec, Canada who loves to use words to depict real life situations that all can relate too. more…

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