Analysis of How shall i sleep now?



How shall i sleep now?
Looked at fun pictures
Looked at your beautiful dance,
Smiling fun
Spreading charm

How shall i sleep now?
Heard your song of calm
Saw that charming eyes,
Mesmerising the surroundings

In your void, call me fake
I don’t know , whether i be fake or a bad trip
I know in your void i am fake

How shall i sleep now?
Collecting my pieces, hoping and praying to the one
Broken but strong
In void, call me fake

How shall i sleep now?
Pretty awake but lost into your dazzling eyes and moves.
Waiting for sun to come up again.

How shall i sleep now?
Thinking about the pain, you suffered
The moment you deserved
The missing smile on your face now
Shall i go back and change the face
Fun isn’t for me, blame is
Good isn’t for me, you are

I wish i could revert the day
I wish i was never born
I wish i could exit the loop of this fake ness

Shall i sleep now?


Scheme Axxbx Axxx cxc Abxc Axx Axxaxxx xxx a
Poetic Form Etheree  (37%)
Metre 11111 11110 1111001 101 101 11111 11111 11101 10010 011111 111101111011 11011111 11111 01011010010101 1011 01111 11111 100111011100101 101111101 11111 100101110 010101 01011111 11110101 111111 111111 11110101 1111101 111110011111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 885
Words 194
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 3, 4, 3, 7, 3, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

This poem revolves around a love story in which, a boy ask god how shall i sleep? After so much happened. He sees his lover having fun, he notices her charm but in her void she blames it to him. Giving his best in his worst time, hoping to be understood. He is ready to undergo the changes but want someone to really notice that.

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Written on October 09, 2022

Submitted by aranya7677 on September 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aakanksh singh

Was born in patna, india. A city of dreams. I did my studies till higher secondary in patna.After that went to ranchi for my senior secondary, current doint btech more…

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