Analysis of Sister Songs-An Offering To Two Sisters - The Proem

Francis Thompson 1859 (City of Preston, Lancashire) – 1907 (London)



Shrewd winds and shrill--were these the speech of May?
A ragged, slag-grey sky--invested so,
Mary's spoilt nursling! wert thou wont to go?
Or THOU, Sun-god and song-god, say
Could singer pipe one tiniest linnet-lay,
While Song did turn away his face from song?
Or who could be
In spirit or in body hale for long, -
Old AEsculap's best Master!--lacking thee?
At length, then, thou art here!
On the earth's lethed ear
Thy voice of light rings out exultant, strong;
Through dreams she stirs and murmurs at that summons dear:
From its red leash my heart strains tamelessly,
For Spring leaps in the womb of the young year!
Nay, was it not brought forth before,
And we waited, to behold it,
Till the sun's hand should unfold it,
What the year's young bosom bore?
Even so; it came, nor knew we that it came,
In the sun's eclipse.
Yet the birds have plighted vows,
And from the branches pipe each other's name;
Yet the season all the boughs
Has kindled to the finger-tips, -
Mark yonder, how the long laburnum drips
Its jocund spilth of fire, its honey of wild flame!
Yea, and myself put on swift quickening,
And answer to the presence of a sudden Spring.
From cloud-zoned pinnacles of the secret spirit
Song falls precipitant in dizzying streams;
And, like a mountain-hold when war-shouts stir it,
The mind's recessed fastness casts to light
Its gleaming multitudes, that from every height
Unfurl the flaming of a thousand dreams.
Now therefore, thou who bring'st the year to birth,
Who guid'st the bare and dabbled feet of May;
Sweet stem to that rose Christ, who from the earth
Suck'st our poor prayers, conveying them to Him;
Be aidant, tender Lady, to my lay!
Of thy two maidens somewhat must I say,
Ere shadowy twilight lashes, drooping, dim
Day's dreamy eyes from us;
Ere eve has struck and furled
The beamy-textured tent transpicuous,
Of webbed coerule wrought and woven calms,
Whence has paced forth the lambent-footed sun.
And Thou disclose my flower of song upcurled,
Who from Thy fair irradiant palms
Scatterest all love and loveliness as alms;
Yea, Holy One,
Who coin'st Thyself to beauty for the world!

Then, Spring's little children, your lauds do ye upraise
To Sylvia, O Sylvia, her sweet, feat ways!
Your lovesome labours lay away,
And trick you out in holiday,
For syllabling to Sylvia;
And all you birds on branches, lave your mouths with May,
To bear with me this burthen,
For singing to Sylvia.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (22%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101010111 0101110101 101111111 11110111 11011100101 1111011111 1111 0101010111 11110101 111111 10111 1111110101 111101011101 11111111 1110011011 11111101 01101011 10111011 1011101 10111111111 00101 101111 0101011101 1010101 11010101 11010111 111110110111 101111100 010101010101 1111101010 11101001 01010111111 010110111 11010111001 0101010101 1111110111 1101010111 1111111101 111011010111 111010111 1111011111 1100110101 110111 111101 011011 11110101 111101101 0101110111 111111 1110111 1101 1111110101 11101011111 110011000111 111101 0111010 111100 011111011111 111111 1101100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,356
Words 423
Sentences 19
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 52, 8
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 939
Words per stanza (avg) 210
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Francis Thompson

The Rt Rev Francis William Banahene Thompson was Bishop of Accra from 1983 to 1996. more…

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