Analysis of A child's thought of God

Denise Y Smith 1972 (Buffalo)



I know there's a God he lives way up in the sky.

I should be able to reach him with an airplane.... I can't! I wonder why.

He sees me but I can only see him when I die.


Scheme A A A
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111001 11110111111111101 1111111011111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 170
Words 43
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

I wrote this precious poem cause this is how I thought of him when I was a child.

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Written on November 24, 1990

Submitted by denisesmithds02 on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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