Analysis of REAL LIFE TRUE STORY

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



Nothing is ever going to change my soul, I am not a mother fucking con man I am not going to bullshit you while trying to sell a rusted-out used car so all I ask for you to try to see and understand

A vision through my poetry a real true story starting to unfold take my hand and ride with me to a different time and place hold onto your pre-programmed mind and your blank stare face

Who is the  one tripping off those magical mushrooms when you speak of dragons and other mystical creatures, read what I so carefully write do not just listen and hear those damn words which I recite bitch please you know they will bring tears to your eyes and have you dropping to your knees

Real life true story every warrior through the hands of time have their moment of glory this moment just happens to be mine

Do not get me wrong I am always battle-ready with my pen in my hand  I go slow and steady for this is a continuing journey it is a marathon to me not a rat race

Let us see who wins at the end as into the dark abyss I watch you descend

Let me do my thing, oh my sweet beautiful magical thing let me make love to those blue lines on the paper like a 2 dollar whore pretends to make love to her trick


Scheme X A X X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 10110101111111010101111110111110110101111111111111001 010111000111010101111011110100101110111101111 11011011100101111100101001011111001111100111111011111111111101110111 11110100100101111110110110110111 111111111010111011111010111001001011010111011 11111101101010111101 1111111110010011111111110101010101111101
Characters 1,204
Words 248
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 136
Words per line (avg) 35
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 35

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Written on September 28, 2022

Submitted by Oakley on September 28, 2022

Modified by Oakley on December 18, 2022

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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