Analysis of The Day That Holds No Light
On a bright morning, my back
kissed my bed the last
and out, my feet decide
To journey in the open
Faces by my side they passed
with smiles and a brief chat
hopeful of the things ahead
And things not sure about
Then a man, quite feminine in act
decides to swing a bat
a shot aimed at my mind
Crick, crack, it snapped
Friendly sport he was
and the Force insisted
I took the next shot
Mine, accompanied by a bang
was the game's very last
as the opponent fell
Too weak to play on
Referees in sirens and
uniforms, held me by hand
and led me to where
My prize I'd receive
The day the force drives
The day that feels blind
is the day that holds no light
Scheme | XAXX ABXX XBCX XXX XAXX XXXX XCX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011011 11101 01111 1100010 1011111 110011 1010101 011101 101110001 11101 011111 1111 10111 001010 11011 10100101 101101 100101 11111 010100 101111 01111 11101 01011 01111 1011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 653 |
Words | 138 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 72 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
Illustrates the dangers of impulsive actions
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Written on September 18, 2022
Submitted by eseiwiosaiga123 on September 27, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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