Analysis of Waiting
By: Rose Lyn Macapuno
It feels like a year of suffering
Too much heartbreak, my heart is wandering
These memoirs had turned into pain
Just like how my heart gone insane
I feel eternally lonely, waiting
Do I deserve such longing?
My mind tells me to break down
But My heart constantly frowns
Must I take a lot of courage?
For I to be that sage
I wish that I am doing well
Since I tried so hard not to dwell
This terrible Loneliness is killing me to death
Like this colossal weight is drowning me
Why do I feel veritably alone? waiting
The river I have created long ago
Becomes a sea of great scape anew
I am appalled to the great beyond
My soul is empty and nothing is certain
For I feel forsaken, still waiting
Scheme | A B B A A B B A X X X C C X X B X A X A B |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 111011100 111111100 1111011 11111101 1101001010 1101110 1111111 1111001 11101110 111111 11111101 11111111 1100100110111 1101011101 111110000110 01011010101 010111101 110110101 11110010110 111010110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 747 |
Words | 170 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 21 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 27 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
About this poem
It is about a woman who wishes to bear a child.
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Written on September 23, 2022
Submitted by roselyn.morgan on September 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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