Analysis of Behind the Closed Eye

Francis Ledwidge 1887 (Slane) – 1917 (Boezinge)



I walk the old frequented ways
That wind around the tangled braes,
I live again the sunny days
Ere I the city knew.

And scenes of old again are born,
The woodbine lassoing the thorn,
And drooping Ruth-like in the corn
The poppies weep the dew.

Above me in their hundred schools
The magpies bend their young to rules,
And like an apron full of jewels
The dewy cobweb swings.

And frisking in the stream below
The troutlets make the circles flow,
And the hungry crane doth watch them grow
As a smoker does his rings.

Above me smokes the little town,
With its whitewashed walls and roofs of brown
And its octagon spire toned smoothly down
As the holy minds within.

And wondrous impudently sweet,
Half of him passion, half conceit,
The blackbird calls adown the street
Like the piper of Hamelin.

I hear him, and I feel the lure
Drawing me back to the homely moor,
I'll go and close the mountain's door
On the city's strife and din.


Scheme AAAB CCCB DDXE FFFE GGGH IIIH JJXH
Poetic Form
Metre 11011001 11010101 11010101 110101 01110111 01101 01011001 010101 01101101 0111111 011101110 01011 0100101 0110101 001011111 1010111 01110101 11110111 011011101 1010101 01011 11110101 0101101 10101100 11101101 101110101 11010101 1010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 909
Words 173
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Francis Ledwidge

Francis Edward Ledwidge was an Irish war poet from County Meath. more…

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