Analysis of Till we meet again



Things are going  back from its places
My smile when I was alone
My peace when I'm not with you
Myself that wants to be competitive again

But my heart is always craving for your hug,
Wanting you here beside me while holding your hand
Your kiss that I missed
Your smile like a baby

Wishing you were a better man on the day that we'd met,
But part of it I also wish that you will be a better man for the women that you'll be happy with
Hoping that you have a great life in this world

Till we meet again..
I want you to turn back and pretend that you didn't see me
Or wanting you to close your eyes once I leave

I don't want you to feel the pain on the day that we both said goodbye
I just want you to feel the happiness in your life
I'll always treasure every memories that we made

Until we meet again...


Scheme XXXA XXXB XXX ABX XXX A
Poetic Form
Metre 111011110 1111101 1111111 11111010001 1111110111 101101111011 11111 111010 10100101101111 11111101111101011010111101 10111011011 11101 111111001111011 11011111111 1111110110111111 1111110100011 1110100100111 011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 812
Words 178
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

I wrote this poem while I'm facing may moving on stage. It makes me feel I am now strong enough to feel and confront my pain.

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Written on August 05, 2022

Submitted by girlyboyles on August 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lilay B

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