Analysis of The Survivors’ Star



The Survivors’ Star
By Eliza Sible

If you look up at the sky, on a certain hour, of a certain night, you’ll see a special star
It’s filled with childrens’ cries and womens’ wooziness, seen but not said from afar

A liar might tell you it’s built from love
But a man will tell you the story of King David, “sent from above”

A story of its birth so beautiful and promising
With an end so horrible and grovelling

It’s like a tattoo that always stays
Or a burn imprinted by a farmer’s craze

It twinkles a bluish glow
Like the tears an unhappy widow would bestow

When you wish upon this star
Pray for the animals drowned in tar

For they were trapped and died in black
Still watching the life they’ll never get back

But forever, it sparkles and gleams
Letting you keep a hold of your dreams

They’ll tell you it’s all imaginary
You tell them it’s only temporary

Look up at the sky
And remember the cry

Of past people like you
And all who are new

It will keep your name in hand
And give it to the dusk’s marching band

Who will play in your dreams at night
And make the next day a little more bright

This special star
Seen from afar
Is for survivors
The Survivors’ Star


Scheme Ax aa bb cc dd ee aa ff gg hh ii jj kk ll aaxA
Poetic Form
Metre 00101 101010 111110110101010101110101 1111010111111101 0101111111 10111101011101101 01011111000100 111110001 11001111 10101010101 1100101 101101010101 1110111 110100101 11010101 1100111011 101011001 101101111 111110100 111110100 11101 001001 111011 01111 1111101 011101101 11101111 0101101011 1101 1101 11010 00101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,206
Words 240
Sentences 1
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This poem is for survivors of sexual assault. How even through everything we’ve been through, there’s a light in the end of the tunnel, and that is the little bit of hope we can hold onto.

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Written on July 25, 2022

Submitted by sibleeliza on August 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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Eliza Sible

Eliza is 14 years old, she loves writing poetry and being in theater productions. She has had her poems featured in podcasts and magazines. more…

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