Analysis of The last day



The cloud sky makes my vision hazy
I forgot my umbrella
I am soaked
I walk along on the wet pathway
I remember how you gave me your umbrella
We were both walking together
The water was getting too heavy to hold
Umbrella falls upside down
It’s windy
It’s stormy
Then there’s silence
And a clear sky
It’s night now
Your gone In a blink of an eye
I blame the storm
I blame me
Not holding your hand
Being there for you
I am sorry for myself
I was wishing on a dead star
It was meaningless
The night went
Sun rose
You woke up
Your new life now truly begins
With only you


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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 583
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 447
Words per stanza (avg) 115

About this poem

The poem is about the last day of school, Experience of friends leaving you. It’s very sad last day at school. All memories put to an end and now you will never ever see them again.

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Written on August 27, 2022

Submitted by wuokka on August 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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