Analysis of Talk to God



I talk about money

I talk about rap music

I talk about gettin' high

But now, I'ma talk about God

Back in the time,

When I was lacking a dime My hopeless youth had me slowly get attracted to crime

Then sat an alliance,

To talk it out with practical minds

Felt a force within me,

Get all my talents combined,

Enacted a mime,

Enlightened I decided to rhyme,

Delighted and excited.

I'm planning to rap till I'm prime.

Started spilling ink on the paper

And planned to get signed.

But the world is biased,

So wild, they got me slapped with a fine

I never got a chance,
Never let me spit on the mic,

Only cuz I come from a land

Where people ain't white

Day and night I keep flowing, completing all my demo tracks,

Inspite being denied the right by

Unleash my rage through music intense

The cultural shock that got my whole community tensed

That's when I, close my eyes and talk to God

Peace in my head, I'm singing this song and it goes

Aathma Raama Aananda Ramana

Achyutha Keshava Hari Narayana

Aathma Raama Aananda Ramana

Achyutha Keshava Hari Narayana


Scheme a b c d e e x x a f e e x e x f x x xb x x x c x d d x A A A A
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 1101110 110111 11111011 1001 111100111011110101011 111010 111111001 101011 1111001 01001 01011011 0100010 11011111 101011010 01111 101110 111111101 110101 10111101 10111101 11011 101111001011101 11001011 011111001 01001111101001 1111110111 101111011011 1111 11101 1111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,093
Words 241
Sentences 4
Stanzas 31
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

I wrote the poem because God give me a strength to keep going difficult situations.

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Written on December 15, 2003

Submitted by piseruchika on August 17, 2022

Modified on April 13, 2023

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