Analysis of sometimes i speak to the dark

Beverly Lenoir 2006 (Seoul)



As I talk to the darkness, I feel its heavy touch grazing my skin.

Resting in cold sweat.

When it is around I fear about the fear I'll feel when it's gone.

Each day I miss its cool touch that would hold me.

I remember,
I hid like others hide when we confide in a void.

Oh, how I loved it,
Loved the void that left.

When I would talk to the darkness, my hair would stand off my neck and arms; my eyes occasionally darted, side to side, observing my shadowed surrounding.

I would talk to the darkness,
as it caresses my skin and plays with my hair.
Whispering to me secrets of laughter, love, anger, and abandonment.
Voices carried through its wind as mine got swept with them.

Where do you go when you leave me?
Where is better than with me?
Will you be back?

When I would talk to the day,
it didn't understand.
It couldn't understand why I'd wait for it to go,
Why I would beg to have back my shade.
the day gave me everything,
 the day gave me life.

But I waited,
I'd still wait.
And it left,
leaving me alone.


Scheme X X X A XX XB C XXXX AAX XXXXCX XXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101111011011 10011 1110111010111111 11111111111 1010 1111011101001 11111 10111 11111010111111101110100010111010110010 1111010 110101101111 100111011011000100 1010111111111 11111111 1110111 1111 1111101 11001 110011111111 111111111 011110 01111 1110 111 011 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,025
Words 234
Sentences 18
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 4, 3, 6, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

the "darkness" resembles my mother and father as well as our relationship. Although they did love me and tried their best to provide for my wants and needs, my mother tended to be very distant emotionally and my father was commonly absent due to working in the military.

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Written on August 11, 2022

Submitted by bev_l on August 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Beverly Lenoir

I am a Black woman raised in a Christian/military household. My mother is a poet so I was raised to be one as well, resulting in me being here today. more…

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