Analysis of Pre-rain

Ling Chuxi 2002 (Beijing)



This mountain;
Brought to life against a grey, white board,
By the hands of an angry Lord.

This wind;
Sweeping dancing trees,
To sing, tease, appease.

This sky;
Seeing long known fears,
Having nothing, but tears.


Scheme XAA XBB XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110 111010111 10111101 11 10101 11101 11 10111 101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 214
Words 46
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

A poem of the time before the rain, bringing words, imagery and imagination into life.

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Written on July 28, 2022

Submitted by duxian829 on August 03, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Ling Chuxi

Ling Chuxi is a 19 year old young adult from China. She is an architecture student who likes to read and write at leisure. more…

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