Analysis of Pain and pleasure
My heart aches but it’s a treasure
My face buried in the shadow yet I can breathe
Nothing waiting patiently for me
Yet ill run - picks a time and leave it all behind
This is the journey back home
This was where I was created
Being here has been so much pain
Is this what it was all supposed to be
But I won’t complain
I can’t
You’re not a voice just a ring in my ear
What do you want now that I’m awake?
Love me?
Maybe this is just a dream
I don’t deserve your love
I don’t deserve anything
This Pain and pleasure
Every conversation starts with you screaming
Today I hear you’re beeping
Today I shall stay awake
So not today
Love, Thomas
| Scheme | AXBX XXCBCX XDBXXE AEEDXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11111010 11100011111 101010011 111101011101 1101011 11111010 10111111 1111110111 11101 11 1101101011 111111101 11 1011101 110111 110110 11010 10001011110 0111110 0111101 1101 110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 667 |
| Words | 137 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 6, 6, 6 |
| Lines Amount | 22 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 125 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 32 |
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