Analysis of My Bruised Golden Lambert

Akojenu Joseph Owolayo 1960 (Lagos)



My lamb was my cherriched
Always by my side from kid
I possessed her with the mothersheep
Her tender easygoing was
My admiration and delight
Unaware of wolf-den close by
Unknown that wolves lures close
A wolves the  lamb unaware of
O!  how I wished the lamb knew
But as a lamb so foolish
Walked into the den unplanned
The golden lamb was bruised
Hurt and wounded so badly
The all ages injury that will
Never and cannot be heal
O! my golden lamb!
As the mother lamb bruised
So bruised thou ,Oh
My golden lamb
How I wish to have you whole


Scheme AABCADEFGHAAIJKLAMLN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 11111 111111 1010101 01010101 1010001 0111111 011111 0101011 1111011 1101110 1010101 010111 1010110 011010011 1001011 11101 101011 1111 1101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 538
Words 106
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 427
Words per stanza (avg) 105

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It was about the rape of my innocent daughter

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Written on May 12, 2009

Submitted by Akojenujoseph on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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