Analysis of I had reached your doorstep



I had reached your doorstep,
But why did you turn me back,
For someone don't you have respect,
Is it the respect that you lack?

Why have you been avoiding me for so long,
Have I done something terribly wrong,
I rung your bell and it said ding,ding,dong,
I waited but no answer came for so long.

I have come to meet you this day,
Please don't keep me at bay,
Please come out of your hiding place,
And let me embrace.

Why have you crumpled our friendship like paper,
And threw it in the dustbin,
Like a biscuit wrapper,
Why did you do it my dear Lynn?

Please open up your door,
I wanna talk to you some more,
Come on out and let's see,
Your favorite golden apple tree.

Thank you for finally giving in,
Thank you for letting me in,
Please don't ever throw out friendship in the dustbin,
Please don't ever do it again.

I wish ,
I wish our friendship remains as strong as steel,
So that the people can feel ,
The bond of friendship between us,
The un breakable bond of friendship between us.


Scheme XAXA BBAB CCDD EFEF GGHH FFFX XIIJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111111 1111101 11001111 11110101111 111101001 11110111 11011101111 11111111 111111 11111101 01101 111101010110 0110010 101010 11111111 110111 11011111 111011 110010101 111100100 1111010 111011100010 11101101 11 111010011111 1101011 01110011 011001110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 995
Words 225
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

I wrote this poem because there is a poem in our English book by this name. I saw the title and this poem just came to my mind. But when I saw the book version it was totally different than my version . So , that's how it came to be.

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Written on August 23, 2023

Submitted by sumayya.rehman23 on August 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sumayya rehman

I am sumayya rehman and writing and reading are my hobbies. I'm currently in grade 11 . But I started writing short paragraphs form grade 2. In grade 3 I started writing free verse and in grade 4 I started writing stories and rhymed poems . So that's how it came to be. more…

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