Analysis of Dahej ki maar

Birendra ray 1996 (Bihar)



Mahamari phaili samaj mein
Chan chan Manav ko kha Rahi!
Ghar to ghar luti ismein
 bahne aansu Baha Rahi !
Garibon ki halat aisi
 Jaise koi majbur baap
beti ki vidai kar
kashton ko de rahi sath,
Chup baithi prashasan Satta
Ghar ke Ghar barbad hua
swarth ke vashibhut Bande
 Swabhiman ko bula raha,
Samaj ki rit anokhi
 purani parampara banaya
 Prem ki saude mein
dukhon ko khoob badhaya !
Sarkar to andhi Bani
 Bahno ke aansu dekh Na paye
samaj to naukar uski
 dekh sab chup rah jaye !
Na jaane kab tak chalegi yah Sitam
 kab tak chalegi julm ki maar
Garibi kitni aur badhegi
Na jane kab khatam hogi dahej ki maar !!


Scheme ABABCDEFGBGBBHAHAHIHJEKE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 111111 11111 1111 1111 1111 1111 11111 1111 111110 1111 11101 1111 111 1111 1111 1111 111111 1111 11111 1111111 111111 1111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 626
Words 128
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 484
Words per stanza (avg) 116

About this poem

Purani riti riwajon se pidit samaj ke logo ka sachitra vivran prayash.....

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Written on August 26, 2022

Submitted by birendraray198 on August 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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