Analysis of Country Not Disarrayed

Sam madeyin 1991 (Ogun States)



My country not in disarrayed my brother
We have only rulers who are not in line with leadership, not even worthy of fortunates heroes,
No head only a bench-warming staple's,
 imagine how coarse would arrangement effect on landline table's be
If leopards skin not be changed, and Eve be saved from her apples

We're not in disarrayed but our ruling ones are, and the way we are rules in an awkward realm
stronger hand we need are not this so called corrupting heroes,
Hear, I would turn the volume of the diffuser voices of the  negroes!

Just of recent, one said and another calls in, we are as unproductive as I blunted disbelieve
through such-like diseases have we all decieve
tongues in the roof we both a cleaves
with pains outdid homebound bereaves


Scheme XAAXX XAA BBXA
Poetic Form
Metre 110101110 11101011101110110101110 111001101 0101110100111101 110111101111010 1101110101100111101101 101111111101010 1111010101101010 1110110010101110101110001 1110101111 10011101 11111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 753
Words 139
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

Comments and Answer-back talks against a writter on Panorama radio news when he said 'our nation's disarrayed'.

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Written on August 22, 2022

Submitted by LiteralErudite on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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