Analysis of Can we



Can we hold each other hands and become one instead of two
Can we fuck science and make our love live forever
Can we make our song and create our symphony
Can we hug each other and forget about the hall world
Can we stop time and keep look at each other eyes
Can we create our own world or look for different planet to live
Can we kiss for the first time and the last time
Can we live forever and forget about time and death
Can we lock our door and forget our keys outdoor
Can we sing the hall night and forget to sleep
Can we dance weirdly and let other thinks we mastered
Can we look at each other like the first time
Can we make beautiful children and let them enter our world
Can we play videogames and let me be the winner one time
Can I play with your hair and feel your face
Can i think about you the hall time and forget my problems
Can I see your face though my eyes and enjoy the view
Can I make you the main character in my stories
Can I take you to my dreams to shine them
Can I take your photos with my eyes and save them in my heart
Can you be the last face I see and your smile the last thing I watch
Can I die in your arms and go back to life with you
Can this be not the last thing I write about you
Can we create our own language and let the love guide us
Can you take me to your place so I can remember the road when I'm lost
Can I feel your arms around my neck everytime you go
Can I tell you my secrets and keep them safe with you
Can I sing my own songs and smile at my favorite part
Can I cry with the smile in my face when I see you arrived
Can I think about you in my darkest time and add some sadness to this beauty
Can I became a painter so I can paint your face on it and add my heart to it  
Can my pen keep writting and my hand never get tired
Can I buy a book with endless pages and be my inspiration
Can you be the only one who read this and forget about it
Can I just love without limitations
Can you enter my world and see how beautiful it is
Can I take as much shots as I want and still remember the road that lead to you
Can I look at the mirror and see two faces instead of one
Can you let me fit in your grave , don't be afraid I don't take so much space
Can I stop writting now because I will miss my class  
Actually I miss it


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Poetic Form
Metre 111110100110111 11110011011010 11110100110100 11111000101011 111101111101 110110111111001011 11110110011 11101000101101 1111010011011 11101100111 1111001101110 11111101011 1111001001110101 1111011101011 1111110111 111011011001110 1111111100101 1111011000110 1111111111 11111111011011 1110111101101111 1110110111111 111101111011 110110110010111 111111111101001111 1111101111011 1111110011111 11111101111001 111101011111101 11101101101011101110 110101011111111011111 1111101110110 1110111010011010 1110101111001011 111101010 11101101110011 11111111101010011111 1111010011100111 111110111101111111 111110111111 100111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 2,302
Words 522
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 41
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,773
Words per stanza (avg) 487

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I was madly in love with someone who never loved me at all , I wrote down some of things I want to do with him but I couldn't , this poem include my hopes , my emotions at that time and it was my only conforter .

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Submitted by jalalmanar15 on August 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I'm 20 years old girl , I'm studying material engineering but it doesn't stop me to give my time to express myself , all my words come from my heart and I feel every single word as it was peace of me more…

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