Analysis of Bright burn

Tamryn demei 2003 (Johannesburg)



                                Bright burn
Love so deep it burns like fume in agony
Fume that brushes the tape of my lips to seal a kiss of fate.
An unprecedented sense of strong compassion to base longing for which we yearn. Yearning to hold which we Can not fathom. Lust as fruitful as the slightest feel of freedom. I cling to your umber.
Your umber of embrace and sweet harmonic comfort. A comfort so empowering it gives light to pave my way to stay. As we lay. Caress my every inch in which we feel the movement on our limbs; as we later rest to the pounding of  exchanging  beat. Your beating heart and my loving sound give birth to a settling love. Under the light that which birthed us for each other


Scheme ABCDD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 11 11111110100 111001111110111 1010011101011101111101111111011101010111011111 111010101010010101001111111111110111001011101011011110110101010111010110111101001100111111110
Characters 713
Words 134
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 107
Words per line (avg) 26
Letters per stanza (avg) 535
Words per stanza (avg) 132

About this poem

It's about that feeling you can't resist when being around the one you love. It describes a passionate love. One that cannot be imagined. A pure love

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Written on August 25, 2022

Submitted by tamrynv20 on August 31, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Tamryn demei

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