Analysis of "I won,t lie"

GLEN EDMOND 2001 (Kampala)



I won't lie
neither to you nor I,
my appreciation I grant to the universe
for my bliss of having the goodie-one.
I needed some one to know and adore,
I mean you girl or my golden bazaar.
And me, my fate was frankly good,
that "some one" allegedly was you,
You rock my untold criteria of Venus.
My glee is undeniably you, sweetheart.
     Not for hyperbole, you were more of
     a lover than my mother was of her tittle.


Scheme AABCDEFGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 111 101111 10010111010 1111100101 1101111001 1111111001 01111101 111010011 111010100110 111010011 110101011 010111011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 421
Words 89
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 315
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

I wrote it about the feeling of being in to another person. it comes from the first experience of the tender cherished feeling.

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Written on August 29, 2022

Submitted by glenkeke019 on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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GLEN EDMOND

I grew up in a small Ugandan village. and studied in various colleges and currently in Makerere University pursuing a Bachelor's Degree in Education of English and Literature. more…

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