Analysis of My thoughts on the Most Beautiful, Fantastic, and Perfect Day on My Planet.

G.M.Y. 2004 (United States)



My soul twists and turns as my heart aches and burns.
My tounge salted by popped corn and lust, but my thoughts tainted by us.
My nose engulfed by pollen from early blooms, my heart beats with heavy booms.
I wish to stay forever, but alas He says "We are not together."
He may have left feeling ordinary but I had left knowing why some may marry.
He gifted me with his touch which to say was not much.
He had truly hit my Achilles heel because of the way he made me feel.
I truly cannot think of a better bride to surrender my pride for just one ride.
I have trouble comprehending my life while I search for a wife.
I do not dispair but believe me when I say it is too hard too care.
I am no ones sir but when I think of him I can not help but purr.
I call myself insane not out of pain, but out of anguish in my own brain, though I wish to be slain it is not to put thy life in the drain.


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Characters 889
Words 198
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 57
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 684
Words per stanza (avg) 187

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My thoughts on a day that one would call a Date but He would not.

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