Analysis of My thoughts on the Most Beautiful, Fantastic, and Perfect Day on My Planet.
G.M.Y. 2004 (United States)
My soul twists and turns as my heart aches and burns.
My tounge salted by popped corn and lust, but my thoughts tainted by us.
My nose engulfed by pollen from early blooms, my heart beats with heavy booms.
I wish to stay forever, but alas He says "We are not together."
He may have left feeling ordinary but I had left knowing why some may marry.
He gifted me with his touch which to say was not much.
He had truly hit my Achilles heel because of the way he made me feel.
I truly cannot think of a better bride to surrender my pride for just one ride.
I have trouble comprehending my life while I search for a wife.
I do not dispair but believe me when I say it is too hard too care.
I am no ones sir but when I think of him I can not help but purr.
I call myself insane not out of pain, but out of anguish in my own brain, though I wish to be slain it is not to put thy life in the drain.
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Metre | 11101111101 1110111011111011 110111011011111101 111101010111111010 11111010011111011110 1101111111111 1110110101011011111 110101101011010111111 111001011111101 111011011111111111 11111111111111111 1110111111111001111111111111111001 |
Characters | 889 |
Words | 198 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 12 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 57 |
Words per line (avg) | 16 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 684 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 187 |
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My thoughts on a day that one would call a Date but He would not.
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