Analysis of Feeling down
I feel like crap
No reason to get up
An extended nap
I feel like sh_t
Like I’m in a deep pit
I feel so empty
No responsibility
Feel like a hillbilly
I say I don’t care
But I need to beware
One less care can lead to another and another
Oh brother, a downhill slope
But I don’t care, nope
Stop being a dope
I’m barely alive and the sunny days pass by
A river I cry
Inside only though
I’m so tired another thing I say
It’s just another day and others wish they had more
Wish I could them mine
And move onto the great divine
Just a lonely elf
Consumed with myself
Scheme | AXABB BBX CCXDDDEEXXXFFGG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 110111 10101 1111 110011 11110 100100 110100 11111 111101 1111110100010 1100111 11111 11001 110010010111 01011 01101 1110010111 1101010101111 11111 01100101 10101 0111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 575 |
Words | 120 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 3, 15 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 145 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
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Written on September 04, 2022
Submitted by takemeback on September 04, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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