Analysis of A Dawning of Dying



In my youth, I saw a bird's ravished body
Lying in the silence of a furrow.
Its auburn feathers were wilted and shoddy,
And ants stripped its flesh and belly thorough.

Strange, so strange imagining this bird to be—
To have once ascended the vaulted blue,
To have woven music in the old oak tree,
Or to have plucked from grass the morning dew ...

And now, alas! struck down from the sky it flew,
This bird, this tiny little creature lies
Displaying a sure message in open view
That whatever comes to live also dies.

In the quietude of that lonely meeting
I marveled dreadfully that this should be:
That death swallows life, and that life is fleeting,
And that all will succumb ...
                                                            ... including me.


Scheme ABAB ACAC CDCD EAEXA
Poetic Form
Metre 0111101110 1000101010 11010010010 0111101010 11101001111 1110100101 11101000111 1111110101 01011110111 1111010101 01001100101 110111101 001111010 1101001111 11101011110 011101 0101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 803
Words 160
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

This poem is based on a real event that occurred very early in my youth when I first became acutely aware—as if by some strange enlightenment or dawning—of the ontic reality of death, hence the title.

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Submitted by Vixility on September 04, 2022

Modified by Vixility on July 10, 2023

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John W. May

John W. May has lived in Colorado all his life. He currently works in the field of ophthalmology and loves to mountain bike and read about history. John first became a lover of poetry in 2008 after having read a poem by John Milton. He has been reading and studying the works of various poets since. His favorite poets are Emily Dickinson, Fyodor Tyutchev and W. B. Yeats. more…

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