Analysis of Keep Closed



How sad,
I can't understand.

What is gone,
I did no wrong.

Longing for a song,
that can tell the tale.

A steady train derailed,
bailed and hard to inhale.

How sad I conclude,
the brood lurks in my mood.

I do what I feel,
for this I reveal my hurt.

Further I pursue,
what's dread of my gloom.

I am not doomed,
ruined but soon I'll let someone in.

Afraid within,
let the strength exist.

A persistence,
a dying wish.

Let go and keep personally closed.


Scheme XX XA AB XB CC XX XX XD DX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1101 111 1111 10101 11101 010101 101101 11101 011011 11111 1110111 10101 11111 1111 10111110 0101 10101 0010 0101 110110001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 464
Words 120
Sentences 12
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

I met a woman who is a widow. I did not understand the severity of its history. Perhaps this poem will suffice.

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Written on August 27, 2022

Submitted by voiceofsilence on August 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Luis A Muniz

I like to keep to myself and play music as a DJ. I mostly enjoy watching films and quiet nights. more…

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