Analysis of Journey



I started out,
just me,
doing what I do,
and being myself,
but then I found you.

I started out,
again,
but now we were two,
doing what we do,
and being ourselves.

Writing,
not difficult,
writing about feelings,
hard,
writing about true feelings,
harder.

Sometimes,
just sometimes,
I feel an ache,
why do I feel this ache?
Because of my emotions.

Experiences....
recalling......
My unfortunate and loyal friend.
I think too deep,
too deeply for matters so simple,
and the reverse,
for matters so complex.

I feel caged,
I've experienced this before,
but not like this.
Is it truly freedom I yearn?


Scheme Axbxb Axbbx cxdxdx eeffx xcxxxxx xxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11 10111 0101 11111 1101 01 11101 10111 010001 10 1100 100110 1 1001110 10 01 101 1111 111111 0111010 01000 010 101000101 1111 110110110 0001 110110 111 10100101 1111 11101011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 600
Words 139
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 5, 7, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by edoziemanikenweze on August 15, 2022

Modified on April 12, 2023

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