Analysis of You Are My Fire



You Are My Fire

You breathe me alive with inspiration
And I fly with creativity on your breeze!
Everyday I deeply observe
All that lies before me
My dilapidated heart
Tired of diurnal and tedious agony
Rises awake to dance,
Sing a new song
And stretch my wings to soar!

You are the one the world hardly knows
Yet faces the foreign as familiar
And as I listen beyond
The notorious noise
Meaning and music
Enlivens my mind
The elusive enigma and energy
I absorb in tranquil abide
And become one with everything.

You are the heartglow inside of me
As I radiate the warmth of the sun
Every star in the cosmos
Pales in significance to you
Your kindness uplifts
My world amidst the universe
Your love is my fire
I burn eternally with grace
And stand tall in your acceptance.

Copyright © 2022 Charles Edward York
No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


Scheme A BCXDXDXXX XAXXXXDXX DBXXCXAXX XA
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 11110 111011010 01110100111 10111001 111011 101001 1010100100100 100111 1011 011111 110101101 1100101010 0111001 001001 10010 01011 00100100100 10101001 0011110 11010111 1110001101 10010010 10010011 1101 1101010 111110 11010011 01101010 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,033
Words 196
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 9, 9, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Written on August 09, 3022

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on August 10, 2022

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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