Analysis of अस्तित्व



मैं लड़की भले ही आम हूं,
पर मेरे ख्वाब नायब हैं

मेरी किस्मत भले ही नाराज है ,
पर मेरी मेहनत का अलग अंदाज है,

मेरा घर भले ही छोटा हो ,
पर मेरे साथ मेरा परिवार है ,

मेरी मु�
्किलें भले ही हज़ार हो ,
पर मेरे पास मेरा भगवान है ,

ये दुनिया भले ही मुझे गिराती रहे ,
पर मुझे संभालने के लिए मेरा हाथ है ,

हां उठकर खुद खड़ी हो सकती हूं मैं,
ये मेरा अहंकार नहीं , मेरा आत्मवि�
्वास है ।


Scheme
Poetic Form Palindrome
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 937
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

this poem is about a girl who didn't has any support or financial background.... but her courage and desire is far more than her situations ... she knows that things may be difficult but never give up ...and hold her own hand .

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Submitted by anshitashankhwar6 on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Anshita

i am a ordinary girl whith extraordinary dreams ... being a poem...frankly speaking...never thought so ...but somehow ...i got this link and trying myself ... poetry is a thing which relaxes me instantly and help me to know myself and my situation in a better way ...i love writing ... this poem is really close to my heart as it is a very special and soulful poem of mine... last month I lost my father because of a major heart attack...it turned my whole life in a misery ... being an elder girl of a family responsibilities shifted on me ... i wrote this poem when i was entirely shattered ... so whenever I feel like giving up this lines strengthen me and brings a new hope in me . more…

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