Analysis of The Drop of Blood turns black



Roses are red just as blood before it dries black, just as it did, from the knife in my back. The wound, so deep it penetrates my heart, just as it does when we're so far apart. The blood runs down and turns the stem black but , nevertheless the knives still in my back, deeper and deeper like a crazy nights love, screaming, oh God with passion and lust the way this plays out is definitely a must.
Violets are blue as we lay so intense my heart so secluded protected by a emotional fence, not to let out, and not to let in, the passion and lust , defense guarded tall as the blood runs down for one and for all as the rose turns black and the Violet remains blue my heart will stay locked and shattered because I lost you.


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Characters 724
Words 143
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 282
Words per line (avg) 72
Letters per stanza (avg) 564
Words per stanza (avg) 144

About this poem

I wrote this poem in a saddened stage of my life, I wrote this poem at the time I was losing my wife, my best friend ,my soulmate.

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Written on July 27, 2022

Submitted by donswanson39 on July 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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