Analysis of HYMNS OF PASSION



a flower a bouquet of hymns, hymns
of passion – gloomy eyes swallowed my glittering diamond  face
                  as i write on the rock and every wave of the blue, above

the kilimanjaro ,the pacific ,the blue skin, the grey stars, the white moon and the golden sun grow up on your palm

It is still cloudy somewhere in the  kingdom of my heart
            the roses, the cactus, the lillies are colourful than freesia  
                   pictures of the bright and dark leaves are yellowed with drums

today I see men with swords eyes almost catching water
pleading with you and i to giggle despite all the jiggle and wiggle like bowlful of jelly.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010001111 110101101100101 1111010100110101 0001000100110110110010111111 1111010010111 010010011111 101010111111 0111111111010 10110111001101001011110
Characters 683
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 3, 2
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

It's a piece that buried pain in the shrine.

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Written on July 21, 2022

Submitted by muddathirsalihu on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Poet of dreams

Muhammad Muddathir Salihu, Is poet , a short story writer, essayist and a literary enthusiast. Freelance/current affairs Editor at Todaypost, Chairman Hilltop Creative art foundation Gombe Branch, Assistant Director Education and training at Gombe Jewel writers Association. Best poet of the year by international forum for culture and humanity, Syria and Finalist at Jewel peace project(JPP). more…

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