Analysis of Hubris

Zulu 2000 (Calabar)



The cacophony of self is my symphony

Dare I say, it is the air I breathe

How do I forget to breathe?

Beautiful word stitching, no meaning

Container, elegantly designed, no content

What a beautiful number pretense is

Played on key hubris

From its acme, I look down

Oh! What height it is

Much invested on my part, for I am at the top

Alone at the top

Devoid of its shadow, truth is bare

Alas, I am afraid of heights

To end it all, I jump from my pride

The cacophony of death is the symphony of peace.


Scheme X A A X X B X X B C C X X X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 001001111100 111110111 1110111 100110110 010100001110 1010010011 11110 1110111 11111 1010111111101 01101 01111111 01110111 111111111 00100111010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 512
Words 114
Sentences 3
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

It is simply a man that falls from his pride to humility because he was alone at "his top".

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Written on July 25, 2022

Submitted by Zulu on July 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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