Analysis of Hope



Darkness falls across the shadow’s edge
Where I stand when the midnight hour is approaching
And it is leading me to the verge of fear
Shivering on a cold winter night with echoes of cries
Pain reverberates through my heart as tears bringing to my eyes
And captured with desperation and loneliness
I am submerging in my feeling
As fear shot through my vein
When a needle of guilt attacking to my own conscious
From the midst of my dream
Is it day or night? Is good or bad?
I am a song with no melody
I am a poem with no rhyme
And words with no forms are falling from my lips
My dream is shattered as I am feeling devastated
Like a boat that lost its directions
My heart is lost for the giving of love
But only left for the bitterness and hopelessness
I am no longer wishing for the blessing of life only
for death
But hope has taken me back to earth and encouraged me to wait
for the devastating moment to come to with a rewarding one
Oh! Nature is beside me and I can feel her smiling at me
Like a blue-violet flower lifting her head as the like river continues to
flow as life shall be carried on
I then discover the light of my dream reach to the blue sky
Like a blooming flower with a pink and white streak on the horizon
Greeting me with pure joy and pride
I then burst into tears of my victory like the prize in triumph bringing home
Ah! At last, I get to drink the sweet wine that I’ve never tasted before


Scheme ABCDDEBFEGHIJKLMNEIOPQIRSTQUVW
Poetic Form
Metre 10101011 111101101010 01110110111 10010110111011 10101111110111 01010100100 1110110 111111 10101101011110 101111 111111111 110111100 11010111 01111110111 1111011110100 101111010 1111101011 1101101000100 111101010101110 11 1111011110010111 1010010111100101 1101011011101011 101100101001101100101 11111101 110100111111011 10101010101110010 10111101 11101111100101010101 111111101111101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,415
Words 280
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,125
Words per stanza (avg) 279

About this poem

A self-reflection of a personal struggle similar to every creator that faces own obstacle in life

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Written on July 08, 2022

Submitted by Drjoes86 on July 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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