Analysis of Black
Dear Black Child
If love is blind then I'll write you these poems in braille,
Just so you understand how your presence makes me feel like an infant I loose my senses around you, ndabafye ichipuba. (I become a fool)
If love is pain then let me bleed to death , just a glance at you I feel endorphines released am high on dopamine, ndofwa kwati nimpepa ibange (I feel like I've smoked weed) trust me it's crazy how I find myself laughing , smiling whenever I walk past you .
If love is promises then am broken , I mean you're the gravity and am the falling pantu (because) your astonishing beauty makes me wonder, you're more of an angel in your past life.
If this be a dream I don't wanna be awaken.
See how natural and soundness of a person you are ?
Your madness makes quite feel afraid cause you dance to the silence
Was your father a thief ?
I wonder how he managed to steal the stars and place them in your eyes .
I wonder how he managed to get the best of drum beaters to place that magical instrument that makes you eloquent peace
Walintoba umutwe nga toba (You have messed up my head like a mess)
Kiwena musali womunde (You're a beautiful woman), musimbi Mubotu nachisotwe (beautiful girl) uwabalikila ngenyali (who lights up like white pure clothing) and am blown away
You're authentic like the mukuyu (tree)
#stevenkasazi #poet #kitwe #BlackChild #africa
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Metre | 111 1111111111001 1110111101111110111100111110101 1111111111101111110111110111111111111110111110100101111 1111001110111010001010101101001011101111100111 1110111101010 11100010101011 110111011111010 111001 11011101101011011 1101110110111101111001001111001 1111111111101 11110100101111001111111111001101 10101011 11011100 |
Characters | 1,378 |
Words | 263 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 71 |
Words per line (avg) | 17 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 82 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
Embracing black African women by not only melanin appearance but works
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Written on March 25, 2022
Submitted by blessings_t on July 29, 2022
Modified on March 15, 2023
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