Analysis of A TELEPHONE CALL TO GOD



Hello dear father
This is temmy on the line
Have decided to drop a voice note
Cos I know you have so much to attend to

Have been to your office countless time
Even to your p.a but no avail
I came in with my full list of request
Trying to make a quest

Have dropped several calls
Trying all your number lines
But all lies deserted

Sometimes I thought it was the network issue
Or perhaps we are having an issue

"The person you re calling is on another call at the moment
Pls hold on or call back later"
Have heard that on my telephone countless time
And I wonder how busy you must have been

And still you have all the attendance and track records
I wonder how it must have been to answer to all the telephone calls in the universe

I await your response to my telephone call
Cos I know you have the perfect timing

So I want to thank you for your response to my last letter
Which has made my life better
And now I make gratitude
My attitude


Scheme AXXB CXDD XXX BB XACX XX XX AAEE
Poetic Form
Metre 01110 111101 11011011 11111111011 111110101 101111101 1101111101 101101 11101 1011101 111010 0111110110 1011110110 01011101101011010 11111110 1111110101 01101101111 0111100100101 110111111101101010010 10110111101 1111100110 111111110111110 1111110 011110 110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 960
Words 211
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 2, 4, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This peom is about gratitude to God knowing how busy he his but never too busy to pay attention to us even with all our request

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Written on July 28, 2022

Submitted by Temmy2022 on July 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Adamolekun Temiloluwa

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