Analysis of why I'm here?

howard bass 1970 (lubbock,texas)



why I'm here I do not know,
I feel like a fish in a very small bowl,
nowhere to run, nowhere to hide,
no one to love by my side,
I just want to fly, fly away,
maybe come back on a better day,
if I died would anyone care,
would their love for me disappear somewhere?
so many questions but no one to ask,
I just want to break this ugly glass,
so, for now I guess I'll go for the simple reason
I may never know........
WHY IM HERE?


Scheme ABCCDDEEFGHAI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 11101001011 111111 1111111 11111101 101110101 1111101 11111011 1101011111 111111101 1111111101010 11101 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 428
Words 102
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 314
Words per stanza (avg) 91

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watching my daughters fish swim in a little bowl while my marriage was crashing

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Written on October 10, 2010

Submitted by bubbab.12104 on July 09, 2022

Modified by bubbab.12104 on July 09, 2022

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