Analysis of A Lover's Lament

Evan MacColl 1808 (Kenmore, Argyll and Bute) – 1898 (Kingston)



In vain do springtime's many charms essay
To chase the gloom in Aray's glen to-day ;
The strains that there once charmed my listening ear
Can ne'er again avail my heart to cheer.
When that fair star, so late my soul's delight,
Hath vanished, never more to cheer my sight,

'When my fond heart, sad-missing joy so brief,
Lies in the dust, enamoured of its grief,


When, for the couch she soon might reach, fove-led.
The grave becometh Jessie's bridal bed.
Well may the tears of friendship freely flow,
And life to me be an unending woe.
Insatiate Death ! was it to make us see
How all impartial fly thy arrows, we
Are left to mourn her dead, whose graces might
Make even thee ashamed our prayers to slight ?

Alas for Life ! its frail unequal thread
Is, like the gossamer in sunshine spread,
The ready wreck of the first passing blast,
And yieldeth first where it should longest last.
'Tis thus that all too soon in death's cold sleep
Closed Jessie's eyes, while mine are left to weep ;
Better it were, than thus be left, to have
My own last sleep beside her iu the grave.
Shade of my love ! if it indeed be true
That spirits blest, though hidden from our view,
May still be round us, guardian angels rare,
Oh, be it mine to feel thee often near,—
An inspiration ever leading me
To justify thy loving sympathy
By actions such as may alone secure
The conscious favour of thy spirit pure.
Come then, in all thy wonted, loving grace.
Making the grief, now my sole guest, give place
To the sweet hope that, this vain hfe once o'er,
I'll see thee and be near thee evermore.


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Poetic Form
Metre 011110101 110101111 01111111001 1101011111 1111111101 1101011111 1 1111110111 10011111 1 1101111111 0111101 1101110101 0111110101 11111111 1101011101 1111011101 11010110111 0111110101 110100011 0101101101 011111101 1111110111 111111111 1010111111 1111010101 1111110111 11011101101 11111100101 1111111101 101010101 110110100 1101110101 010111101 110111101 1001111111 10111111110 111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,545
Words 293
Sentences 14
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 8, 20
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 403
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Evan MacColl

Evan MacColl (Scottish Gaelic: "Eóghann MacColla") was a Scots-Canadian Gaelic poet who also produced poems in English. He is commonly known in his native language as Bàrd Loch Fìne (the "Poet of Loch Fyne"). Later he became known as "the Gaelic Bard of Canada". more…

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