Analysis of Heartbroken

Cheyenne Blodgett 2009 (Washington state)



                                                                                                                                                                            Heartbroken
By: Cheyenne Blodgett

What did it matter?
My heart pounded when i reached the lobby
Leaving me standing there.
Flying way over the water at night
I waited for them to come.
His eyes seemed sad
Buckle up.
I have heard it before
He put on his headphones.
Sweat trickled down my face
Here we go.
I grasped my seat
It felt as if i  were a dog on a leash!
Later my stomach grumbled
Not again.
I look ahead
The flight go tougher and tougher
Constantly lurching in the darkness.
I try not to think about the dark water beneath me
Nothing but a dark salty water.


Scheme XX ABXXXXXXXXXXXXXXAXBA
Poetic Form
Metre 10 10110 11110 1110111010 101101 1011001011 1101111 1111 101 111101 11111 110111 111 1111 11111001101 1011010 101 1101 01110010 100100010 11111010110011 101011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 740
Words 119
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 20
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 223
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

It's about this girl having a break up meltdown and she is dreaming about all the good times she had with her boyfriend

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Written on February 06, 2022

Submitted by 27blodgettc on June 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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