Analysis of Dying Friend

Daniel Kelty 1963 (St. Louis, MO)



A Dying Friend

Is like wheat ripening alone
near a stand of oaks,
with only the wind to stroke
its back on the quiet days.

Now in August even the raccoons
have turned their backs on the fields,
heading for water.  A car

glides by imposing its monochrome blankness
onto the moment that the seeds
begin to loosen in their husks,  

as if getting ready to fly.


Scheme X XAXX XXX AXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 11110001 10111 1100111 1110101 101010001 1111101 1011001 110101101 10010101 01110011 11101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 360
Words 75
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

Publisthed in "Off the Coast" literary journal

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Submitted by dankelty on July 07, 2022

Modified on March 21, 2023

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Daniel Kelty

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