Analysis of THE DAWNING SUN



I think of you my darling,
As the dawning sun appears,
I think of you dear starling
While the earth absorbs my tears,

The sun burns hot at midday,
Sweet thoughts of you persist,
My tears continue flowing,
Your image, blurred in mist,

As the sun sets I'm aware,
You're no longer here with me,
Heaven knows my deep despair,
Knows I need your company,

Comes midnight, how I dread it so,
As the darkness shuts my eyes,
Alone I cry myself to sleep,
Till the dawning sun will rise.


Scheme AXAX XBAB CDCD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1111110 1010101 1111110 1010111 011111 111101 1101010 110101 1011101 1110111 1011101 1111100 1111111 1010111 0111111 1010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 480
Words 107
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

In honor of my dear wife who lost her battle with cancer in the year 2015. It depicts the loneliness experienced with each passing day without her

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Written on December 29, 2015

Submitted on June 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dominick C Parisi

Merely an amateur writer trying to express my sadness at the loss of my wife. more…

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