Analysis of You Are More
Tanya Larsen 1974 (st louis)
You Are More
A mother, a daughter, a friend
these, the titles we are given.
Can sometimes make us feel less than
tired., exhausted, inept and driven.
But.... You are more.
Mother is not an all encompassing word
Drudgery, cleaning, diapers and aches.
Constant judging, opinions and scorn.
Feet hit the floor before anyone wakes.
It's beauty, it's hope, it's loving embraces
Hugs and cuddles and kisses and dreams
It;s knowing you'll keep going
when it's NOT peaches and cream
But...You are more
A daughter. Never feels good enough
Watching childhood dreams and ambitions roll by
Losing our loved ones to either Heaven or Earth
Anxiety mounting, always ready to cry.
But... It's so much more
A daughter. Supportive, caring and kind.
Quick to help others, slow to anger (at times)..
Witty and bright, the pride of her mom
The smile of an angel to part clouds in the skies.
But...you are more
You are my friend, my love, my heart and my joy
You can raise spirits up, ground my feet to the floor
You are sweetness [personified, I am always so proud
To call you my daughter and so much more.
When you are low, feeling less than and sad
When anxiety comes and you feel under par
Know you are treasured by all that matter
Your family, your kiddos who love you by far.
We could never do without you.
You ARE More
Scheme | A xbxb a xcxc xxxx A xdxd a xxxx A xaxa xexe x A |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 01001001 10101110 10111111 1001001010 1111 10111101001 1001010001 101001001 110101101 11011110010 10101001 1101110 1111001 111 010101101 1011001011 1010111101011 01001011011 11111 0100101001 11110111011 100101101 011110111001 111 11111111011 111101111101 1110111111 1111100111 1111101101 101001011101 1111011110 11001111111 11101011 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,336 |
Words | 270 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 14 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 1, 4, 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 4, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 72 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
About this poem
Written for my daughter who never feels like sheis doing anything right. She is often depressed but has so many blessings I wanted to make them easier to see.
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Written on May 28, 2022
Submitted by tanyalarsen74 on June 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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