Analysis of need i say more?

aisyah sidhu 1981 (kuala lumpur)



his glance
nothing but affection
his lips just bursting
inviting mine to taste it

my mind wanders silently
to hislips on my bare skin
i trembled.. damn it
the longing of his hands
carresing my face slowly
while his breath touched my ears,
its been a long time
since i hv felt thissense  of sensuality,
my soul aches in silence
oh it aches
i just smiled....
yet mysoul is screaming!!!
my soul is screaming in silence....


Scheme XXAB CXBXCXXCDXXAD
Poetic Form
Metre 11 101010 11110 0101111 1110100 111111 11011 010111 11110 111111 11011 11111110 111010 111 111 11110 11110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 420
Words 81
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 13
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 39

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fascination over a younger man

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Written on June 08, 2022

Submitted by nuraisyahsidhu on June 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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