Analysis of The lost race

Rob Loomer 1979 (Las Vegas)



Faster than a racecar
I live my life with speed
Gaining everything I thought
That I would ever need
One more rig inside my veins
Looking for the flag
I begin to taste the thrill first place
Never thinking of rehab
The final lap has come and gone
No second place to choose
No one to beat my own defeat
A race I'll always lose


Scheme ABCBDEFGHIJI
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 111111 101011 111101 1110111 10101 101110111 1010100 01011101 110111 11111101 01111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 324
Words 65
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 65

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A poem from the addict in recovery

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Written on May 16, 2022

Submitted by robloomer1979 on May 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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