Analysis of Suicidal Tendencies
I feel as if I'm gonna suffocate,
These people I really don't want to aggravate,
This pain is just too real,
Although, I cover it up like it's no big deal,
This seems like my own personal obsession,
Also my worst possible demon,
I feel as if I'm just invisible,
Fuck, these feeling's are just so consistable,
There's no way I can restrain,
To just keep myself from saying "Fuck it" and numb the pain,
I am my own worst enemy,
Plus I have all these fucking suicidal tendencies,
My life's filled up with all this abuse,
And God, I'm so easily bruised,
Maybe I'm just insane,
That's why I can't get these thought's out of my brain,
I feel as if I'm already in my casket,
There's got to be more than life than all this bullshit,
Lord, please help me find a way,
To just wake up another day.
Scheme | AABBCCDBEEFGHIEEJKLL |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111010 11011011110 111111 11101111111 11111100010 101110010 1111110100 1111111 1111101 1111110110101 11111100 1111110010100 111111101 01111001 101101 11111111111 111110100110 11111111111 1111101 11110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 788 |
Words | 170 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 596 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 151 |
About this poem
This poem is based on the things that ive been thru and that other people have and are going thru... I wrote it to try to help someone experiencing the same things... Maybe help save a life...
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Written on April 20, 2022
Submitted by Jaynjay34 on May 02, 2022
Modified on April 21, 2023
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