Analysis of Magnificent Coincidence



Tremendous and miraculous.
Is the clearing of a view.
From where many these days,
Discover themselves sitting.
With no one else left to blame.
Or accuse to victimize.
By the making of false claims.

This admission to oneself,
Haunts to taunt one's brain.
Like a sustain nightmare,
Of wicked business to conduct.
Until that day comes along,
When deception to confess it...
Becomes regretted to know was wrong.

Deluding to fiction truth and its reality?
Comes back to sting worse than a bee.
And loses its appeal.
Turning beautiful butterflies...
To hunt down and swarm around,
The very ones who made them enemies.

And in these awakening days and times,
Many are finding...
A loss of appetite,
For another lie to them heard to tell.
Sold to sell.
Leaving behind,
Those they realize had been the culprits.
Trapped.
In an irreversible effect.
Created and caused,
By their mental defects.

What a magnificent coincidence.
To observe to see witnessed yet disbelieve,
How the ones to had once been victimized...
Are sought to seek for cures and remedies.
And they were always the ones,
Forgiving to forgive but not forget.
Being tormented.
By ongoing public viciousness.
But...
Not known to reveal,
Animosity to feel it felt.
Towards those exposing themselves to be...
Faithfully out of their minds.
And...
For a very long time.
Although...
Will still listen,
To the ones expressing...
Their remorse to regret.
Expecting acceptance for themselves to get!

'How difficult it must and has to be.
To hear from us our apologies!'

'Uh...hold on.
You expect from us to discuss WHAT?
Our future together?
Are we not the ones,
You convinced so many...
We were ignorant, stupid.
Lazy and scum.
And much too dumb to be thought as equals?
With an attempt to replace,
Your wholesome values WE disgraced?'

'There you go,
Using race and bringing up the past.
Ok.
We admit,
There had been some mistakes made.
However...
Isn't it time to get over it?
Isn't it time,
To forget and forgive...
What our ancestors had done?
Remember...
So bright is the future for 'us' to fulfill.'

'Then after that bright future comes?
What will you then do?
Blame to claim,
Your image to value...
It was 'we' and not 'you',
Who introduced the shame produced.
By a labeling us with disgusting names.'

'You people.
You people are always bringing up the past!'

'Repetition...
Never leaves its magnificent presence.
What a coincidence.'

'What does that mean?
I don't understand.'

'Repetition,
Is seldom a one time thing!'


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Poetic Form
Metre 01000100 1010101 111011 0100110 1111111 1011100 1010111 101011 11111 10011 11010101 0111101 10101011 010101111 01011010110 11111101 010101 1010010 1110101 0101111100 0010100101 10110 01110 1010111111 111 1001 111011010 1 01010001 01001 111010 1001000100 10111101001 1011111100 1111110100 010101 0101011101 1010 11010100 1 11101 01001111 0110100111 1001111 0 101011 1 1110 101010 101101 01001010111 1100110111 1111100100 11 101111011 1010010 11101 101110 1010010 1001 0111111110 110111 11010101 111 101010101 11 101 1111011 10 101111101 1011 101001 1101011 010 11101011101 11011101 11111 111 110110 111011 1010101 10100110101 110 1101110101 010 1011010010 100100 1111 1101 010 1100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,484
Words 522
Sentences 72
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 6, 11, 20, 2, 10, 12, 7, 2, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 91
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on June 07, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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