Analysis of Running forward.



Footsteps of the past;
had been present,
along with the golden thread of sorrow;
I have always walked alone without.
Not trusting hope,
not trusting life,
not trusting everything.

This was who I was;
this was always how I have felt;
but when I walked in;
you put out your hand and said
"It's okay;
follow me and I will show you a taste of the sun"

For you took life,
and emitted it;
from the very being of your soul;
so I started chasing.

"Look at the wonder!" I thought,
but when I got to the end of the road,
where only the small rays of time remained,
you said,
"It's your turn to show someone the light;
take it and run with your life;
for it's all you will always have."

So, I took a ray and ran;
I ran as far as I could with it;
but then the ray of light I had left;
started to flicker out.
"No!" I screamed to the torrent wind;
"I don't want to be left in the dark again!;

The ray glowed;
and a string of white appeared before me;
like time it's self said;
"It will be okay;
so pick up your head;
and keep running even in the dark!"
I took it with the hope of a friend at the other end,
and kept running.


Scheme XXXAXBC XXXDEX BFXC XGXDXBX XFXAXX GXDEDXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1110 0110101110 11110101 1101 1101 11010 11111 1111111 11110 1111101 11 1010111101101 1111 00101 101010111 111010 1101011 1111101101 1100111101 11 11111101 1101111 1111111 1110101 111111111 110111111 101101 11110101 11111100101 011 0011101011 11111 1111 11111 011010001 11110110110101 0110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,117
Words 269
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 4, 7, 6, 8
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Written on June 03, 2022

Submitted by Allora_Hikaru on June 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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