Analysis of The Best And Sweet Wishes. ( Lyrical Song ).

brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Environment, for you, a good hope,
Atmosphere, for you, is this bell,
An earthquake, keep away forever,
You cyclone, go to the hell........,

'O' Lucky  smile, you are always welcome,
'O'Dear wit, you too are also welcome,
Fees of goodness, may always be, with me,
A real living life, keep accompanying me,
You may, God, please take care of me,
Give me a boon, to live like a royal life,
Give me all that, what is my earned right,
I hope to be good, worthy and wealthy,
With my good deeds, with my best wishes,
May you, God, make allover their peace back,
Along with a wish of, no more be there, the war............


Scheme XAXA BBCCCXXCXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 010011011 1011111 11101010 1011101 110111110 1111111010 111011111 011011010001 11111111 11011110101 111111111 1111110010 111111110 11111111 011011111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 615
Words 129
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 11
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 221
Words per stanza (avg) 58

About this poem

From a long time I was not able to write a song, writing songs is my favourite passion. This. Poem I have written for a good hope and peaceful future. Please the viewers are requested to make comments. Thanks.

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Written on May 31, 2022

Submitted by brijmohanpoply01 on June 03, 2022

Modified by brijmohanpoply01 on June 03, 2022

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brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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