Analysis of Who I wanna be

Dhanya 2000 (Tamil Nadu)



I lost myself
In the garden of eve
With peace and love
Far ever evergreen
Shook my heart with
A beautiful melody
Close your eyes
And choose who wanna be
May be a catapillar
May be a flower
Cause your are the
Only one who knows who you are
Like the cherries
Beam your day.


Scheme ABCDEFGFHHIHJK
Poetic Form
Metre 111 001011 1101 11010 1111 0100100 111 011101 1101 11010 1110 10111111 1010 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 275
Words 59
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

It's about a person who is lost in this world and hopes to bring back his/herself soul to a meaningful one by going around the garden of the eve

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Written on May 27, 2022

Submitted by dhanyalak20k on May 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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